Happy Dance Friday.....I'm unable to post a video this week...so I'm conceding to Sarge Charlie as the winner! ;-) He always does a warm up for my Happy Dance. Go see his! Funny stuff.
I hope everyone had a great Thanksgiving and are enjoying a relaxing day today...I had a wonderful one. And I didn't even overeat for a change...At least I don't have that turkey/pie/icecream/eggnog/popcorn/etc hangover today.
I'm now participating in 55 Flash Fiction Friday, set up by Mike , the originator of the Writer's Experiment (see link on my list). It tells a story in 55 words. Here's my first:
A Brother
He was on top of the world, but he couldn't see that.
He was so high, he fell off and tumbled into the depths of hell, where he stayed.
He tried a few times to climb out, but he never made it back.
Now we'll never see his smiling face again.
He drowned in alchohol.
Peace
20 comments:
Your 55 was very stark, and it hits hard....
Good job Odat. I hope yo uhad a good day yesterday. Cheers!!
hi odat. i know that guy.
smiles, bee
xoxo
Happy Friday to you, Odat !
Your flash Friday was sad. May he rest in peace. It sounds like you cared a lot - and still miss him a lot, too.
the 55 word thing is a good idea...
Loving Annie
Poetic tragity.
The true definition of 'sobbering'.
I love flash fiction. I think it's an excellent way to really bone up on writing skills - and yours is nicely done! It takes me days to do a flash - good work! :)
That is a sad one, I'm sorry.
ANd Happy Thanksgiving to you, too.
Touching 55 ODAT. Hugs from the Monkey King
Wow. That's very stark, with not a syllable to spare.
I've never done a 55. Very cool.
Happy Thanksgiving Odat! I hope you ate well, and are enjoying leftovers now. Relax, and kick back! And keep writing, you're good.
Monty
I wonder where Miss bee knows the guy from, you should just give up every week, I have some in the bank......
A hell of a story in only 55 words!
Hi Odat! Long time no see. So you're into 55 now! Cool. Nice one!
Happy Thanksgiving (day after). :)
That is very touching & poignant!
great 55 Odat!
Mine is up too!
Have a great day.
~Oswegan
Loved your 55!!
Great 55 Odat. I just joined too, did my first one last week.
Nice 55! Hope your Thanksgiving was good!
Excellent 55. Very powerful.
I'm with the gang...wow.
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