That's just like getting into your car only to arrive at your destination without remembering your drive. I love Auto pilot even if it is a bit scarey.
Nice stream of prose and an even nicer thigh shot!!
Odat, I love your poem...love it! Have a wonderful day...
Very nice poem! I'm impressed that you didn't go with the obvious rhyming of the word deep with sleep. It's a rookie mistake and you didn't fall for it ;-)
I like the poignancy. And I think it's great when the words come out sounding just right from your subconscious.
This poem put me to sleep.JUST KIDDING! I couldn't resist. Honest. Very nice. ;)
I really like it. You should write more.
Summer these poems are pretty cool.
Nice poem :-)-is it bad that all I can think about is how cold the girl will be?
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