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Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Sleep Poem

Walking thru the autumn leaves I slip....
And fall into winter,
then spring back up
Summer these trips are harder than others.

The above came out in a dreamlike trance... it was like I wasn't doing it...it was just there.

Have a wonderful day, in spite of it all.

Peace

9 comments:

Pickled Olives said...

That's just like getting into your car only to arrive at your destination without remembering your drive. I love Auto pilot even if it is a bit scarey.

Matt-Man said...

Nice stream of prose and an even nicer thigh shot!!

Claudia said...

Odat, I love your poem...love it! Have a wonderful day...

Michael C said...

Very nice poem! I'm impressed that you didn't go with the obvious rhyming of the word deep with sleep. It's a rookie mistake and you didn't fall for it ;-)

Lizza said...

I like the poignancy. And I think it's great when the words come out sounding just right from your subconscious.

Dan said...

This poem put me to sleep.

JUST KIDDING! I couldn't resist. Honest. Very nice. ;)

The CEO said...

I really like it. You should write more.

heartinsanfrancisco said...

Summer these poems are pretty cool.

ShadowFalcon said...

Nice poem :-)

-is it bad that all I can think about is how cold the girl will be?