Walking thru the autumn leaves I slip....And fall into winter,
then spring back up
Summer these trips are harder than others.
The above came out in a dreamlike trance... it was like I wasn't doing it...it was just there.
Have a wonderful day, in spite of it all.
Peace
9 comments:
That's just like getting into your car only to arrive at your destination without remembering your drive. I love Auto pilot even if it is a bit scarey.
Nice stream of prose and an even nicer thigh shot!!
Odat, I love your poem...love it! Have a wonderful day...
Very nice poem! I'm impressed that you didn't go with the obvious rhyming of the word deep with sleep. It's a rookie mistake and you didn't fall for it ;-)
I like the poignancy. And I think it's great when the words come out sounding just right from your subconscious.
This poem put me to sleep.
JUST KIDDING! I couldn't resist. Honest. Very nice. ;)
I really like it. You should write more.
Summer these poems are pretty cool.
Nice poem :-)
-is it bad that all I can think about is how cold the girl will be?
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