I hope this is fiction
Always work on the first floor of a building....
Ha...Very good, but I refuse to scroll down for Happy Dance Friday, and you can't make me. Cheers!!
Now that was some flight !!
Magnificent & magnanimous!
Eeeek that is quite a bummer. What a sissy to leave his wife with the troubles.
How sad, but a great 55. :) Mine's up.
I love your flash fiction. One tiny, tiny criticism? The ending.... I don't buy it. Maybe he's having an affair. Maybe he's an overeater. Or an alcoholic. Something.I like it.
This is well played Odat. I'm fresh out this week - but yours is really great! :)
You are amazing at the 55s! Great one!
I have chills. Wow.You are really, really good at this!
What is 55 Flash Fiction Friday?Do you have to be over 55 to play?;-)
Patti, Yes this one is...and 55 Flash is a story in 55 words, that has a beginning, a middle and an end...If you go to the site listed first on my list, you'll see more about it there...you should do it!Buffalo, For sure!!!Matt-man, thanks...No soup for you!paul, uh huh...poor guy.annie, yup! ouch indeedie.roger, so whadda ya really think?lol christy, punk man.akelamalu, Thank you so much...yours is great too ;-)M@ Thanks..what happened here is that I thought up the punch line first...about "he'stepped away" and "out the window" and I worked my way back. But I do see your point.claudia, thanks...I can't believe your "fresh out"!!! No way!real and heart,Thanks so much!!! I like it cause it's short...I like to hit and run...(the story of my life...lol)Peace
A bad day at the office can be a real killer.
there was an article about ten years ago that pointed out (unlike financial buildings) the buildings in high tech are only a few stories tall cause they are in earthquake country....I should try to find it.
I never saw it coming.Great Flash Fiction!
Best to work in a sprawling single story building.Good story and nice twist.
thanks for the explanation ;-)
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